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Piggy’s glasses are being used to light the fire and they are a symbol of technology because without them, the boys would not have made a fire, this is also a major change because it is used as a gadget for survival, “His specs-use them as burning glasses!” (32)
His glasses also represent his weakness. When he takes them off, he is blind and vulnerable, but once he has them on, he is confident. He is picked on because of his physical state and because he is the only one with glasses, it has a great change on him as he is not the same without them as he is with them. “Mind out! Give ‘em back! I can hardly see!” (32)
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Piggy’s glasses change from being used for good, to being used for evil as Jack uses them to smoke out Ralph and Piggy. It defines how man can make technology that helps the word, but also be used to destroy it as it can be misused. “The fire was a big one and the drum-roll that he had thought was so far behind was nearer.” (178)
*Alfredo Cortez*

A shadow fronted him (4) tempestuously. (79)
On this left were four small logs, one of them - the farthest - (5) lamentably springy.
Piggy nodded (6) propitiatingly.(6)propitiatingly
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Slowly the waters sank among the rocks, revealing pink tables of granite, strange growths of coral,(7) polyp, and weed. (92)
To carry he must speak louder; and this would rouse those striped and (8) inimical creatures from their feasting by the fire. (169)

Presentation: 2, the punctuation involving quotes was a little off.
Gabby Murphy, Zack More, Lacey Sanchez
Luizangel Walle, Jake Shelton
DM: 2- the five defining moments are there, but you do not tell us if they are minor or major changes.
Quotes: 3- the quotes are explained thoroughly and the detailed analysis of them supports the defining moments.
Presentation: 2- all spelling is correct, but some of the quotes were not documented correctly and punctuation is missing.

None of your listed things show if the event was a major or minor change, yet you did list all of your defining moments, so 8/9.
Chase Guthrie, Dmitry Smith and James Thomas
Defining moments: 3
Quotes: 3
Presentation: 2, the punctuation involving quotes was a little off.
Gabby Murphy, Zack More, Lacey Sanchez

Quotes: 3- The five quotes clearly demonstrated the defining moments.
Presentation: 3- No errors in grammar or spelling except for the word “oursiders” which was clearly meant to be outsiders.
Defining moments: 3
Quotes: 3
Presentation: 2, your punctuation involving quotes was off.
Zack More, Gabby Murphy, Lacey Sanchez

Defining Moments: 2, a couple of your moments were lacking some detail
Quotes: 2, the quote, "Huts on the Beach" doesn't really say anything about the moment
Presentation: 33'
Zack More, Gabby Murphy, Lacey Sanchez

Quotes: 2- The quotes clearly demonstrated your information, but there was one quote that was a little weak for support. ("Huts on the Beach(39).")
Presentation: 2- all grammar and spelling is correct, but the quotations are documented incorrectly.
Defining Moments: 2, a couple of your moments were lacking some detail
Quotes: 2, the quote, "Huts on the Beach" doesn't really say anything about the moment
Presentation: 3

The word outsider you spelled "oursider," but that's obviously a mistake so you're good. All of your things met the criteria, so 9/9.
Chase Guthrie, Dmitry Smith and James Thomas
Luizangel Walle, Jake Shelton
DM: 3- Five appropriate moments were chosen with clear and insightful meaning and each were strongly supported.
Quotes: 3- The five quotes clearly demonstrated the defining moments.
Presentation: 3- No errors in grammar or spelling except for the word “oursiders” which was clearly meant to be outsiders.

All criteria is met, 9/9.
Chase Guthrie, Dmitry Smith and James Thomas
Les Scores
Defining Moments - 2
Quotes - 2
Presentation - 2
-Alec Muklewicz, Connor Thomas-