1. Piggy defines the use of the conch;
"We can use this to call the others. Have a meeting. They'll come when they hear us-" (Golding 10);
It shows that Piggy is the idea maker of the group, but is not a doer, as in, he comes up with ideas, but has someone else carry them out. This is a major change because it shows that Piggy is different in the way that he thinks rather than works, further isolating him.
2. Piggy's glasses are stolen;
"From his left hand dangled Piggy's broken glasses." (Golding 151)
When Piggy's glasses were stolen, he wanted to go to Jack's camp and ask for them back, because it was the right thing to do. This shows that Piggy strongly believes in both peace and honor, as he suggested this instead of a raid, or sneaking in and stealing them back. This is a major change, because it shows even more how different Piggy is from the rest of the boys, who believe in violence.
3. Piggy has a great disinclination for manual labor;
"... Piggy was an oursider, not only by accent, which did not matter, but by fat, and ass-mar, and specs, and a certain disinclination for manual labor." (Golding 54);
Piggy was someone who thought about things a lot, rather than just doing things. He did not participate in heavy labor, and this helped to set him apart from the others. He was the only thinker, and everyone else was a doer. This was major, as it showed how different Piggy was from everyone else.
4. Piggy's glasses are broken;
"Piggy's glasses flew off and tinkled on the rocks." (Golding 60)
When Piggy's glasses broke, it was because he was being taunted for pointing out the immaturity of some of the other boys. The fact that Piggy is so much more mature than the others sets him apart even more. This is major, as it sets him as a target for further bullying, and increases his isolation.
5. Piggy's hair doesn't grow;
"He was the only boy on the island whose hair never seemed to grow." (Golding 54)
While the hair of all the other boys on the island grows out, Piggy's hair stays the same length. This shows how Piggy remains civilized, while the others become more and more wild. This is a minor change, as it is not mentioned heavily, and it is supplemental to the idea that Piggy is more civilized, rather than defining it.
-Thomas and Elizabeth
The word outsider you spelled "oursider," but that's obviously a mistake so you're good. All of your things met the criteria, so 9/9. Chase Guthrie, Dmitry Smith and James Thomas
Luizangel Walle, Jake Shelton
DM: 3- Five appropriate moments were chosen with clear and insightful meaning and each were strongly supported.
Quotes: 3- The five quotes clearly demonstrated the defining moments.
Presentation: 3- No errors in grammar or spelling except for the word “oursiders” which was clearly meant to be outsiders.
Defining moments: 3
Quotes: 3
Presentation: 2, your punctuation involving quotes was off.
"We can use this to call the others. Have a meeting. They'll come when they hear us-" (Golding 10);
It shows that Piggy is the idea maker of the group, but is not a doer, as in, he comes up with ideas, but has someone else carry them out. This is a major change because it shows that Piggy is different in the way that he thinks rather than works, further isolating him.
2. Piggy's glasses are stolen;
"From his left hand dangled Piggy's broken glasses." (Golding 151)
When Piggy's glasses were stolen, he wanted to go to Jack's camp and ask for them back, because it was the right thing to do. This shows that Piggy strongly believes in both peace and honor, as he suggested this instead of a raid, or sneaking in and stealing them back. This is a major change, because it shows even more how different Piggy is from the rest of the boys, who believe in violence.
3. Piggy has a great disinclination for manual labor;
"... Piggy was an oursider, not only by accent, which did not matter, but by fat, and ass-mar, and specs, and a certain disinclination for manual labor." (Golding 54);
Piggy was someone who thought about things a lot, rather than just doing things. He did not participate in heavy labor, and this helped to set him apart from the others. He was the only thinker, and everyone else was a doer. This was major, as it showed how different Piggy was from everyone else.
4. Piggy's glasses are broken;
"Piggy's glasses flew off and tinkled on the rocks." (Golding 60)
When Piggy's glasses broke, it was because he was being taunted for pointing out the immaturity of some of the other boys. The fact that Piggy is so much more mature than the others sets him apart even more. This is major, as it sets him as a target for further bullying, and increases his isolation.
5. Piggy's hair doesn't grow;
"He was the only boy on the island whose hair never seemed to grow." (Golding 54)
While the hair of all the other boys on the island grows out, Piggy's hair stays the same length. This shows how Piggy remains civilized, while the others become more and more wild. This is a minor change, as it is not mentioned heavily, and it is supplemental to the idea that Piggy is more civilized, rather than defining it.
-Thomas and Elizabeth
The word outsider you spelled "oursider," but that's obviously a mistake so you're good. All of your things met the criteria, so 9/9.
Chase Guthrie, Dmitry Smith and James Thomas
Luizangel Walle, Jake Shelton
DM: 3- Five appropriate moments were chosen with clear and insightful meaning and each were strongly supported.
Quotes: 3- The five quotes clearly demonstrated the defining moments.
Presentation: 3- No errors in grammar or spelling except for the word “oursiders” which was clearly meant to be outsiders.
Defining moments: 3
Quotes: 3
Presentation: 2, your punctuation involving quotes was off.
Zack More, Gabby Murphy, Lacey Sanchez